Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary A recent survey revealed that 90 percent of people polled beli

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Could someone check these sentences and make them sound more natural?. Please feel free to edit or make any changes you deem necessary A recent survey revealed that 90 percent of people polled believe that school does not preprare students for real life and I believe their argument doesn't hold water for three reasons which I will explain below

24 de abr de 2024 19:03

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A recent survey revealed that 90 percent of people who polled believe that schools do not prepare students for real life. I believe their argument doesn't hold water for three reasons which I will explain below.

Hi, Jose! Just some minimum corrections. Great job! ⭐😊

24 de abr de 2024 19:10

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